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Growing old: what I think will happen when getting older
Posted by du courage, Sep 6, 2012. 3571 views. ID = 5848

Growing old

Posted by du courage, Sep 6, 2012. 3571 views. ID = 5848
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My toes are cold
my skin grows old
my mind
behind
on stories yet untold

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Douglas
Sep 6, 2012
I love how you have so succinctly expressed these feelings!
   ~Posted by Douglas, Sep 6, 2012

Trent
Sep 6, 2012
Stories yet untold.

Very very nice.
   ~Posted by Trent, Sep 6, 2012

Jeff Howe
Sep 21, 2012
This is about perfect. Good work :)
   ~Posted by Jeff Howe, Sep 21, 2012

Realist101
Jan 5, 2013
I enjoy anything to do with the elderly and this short poem is a lovely illustration of how it might be to be old. Nice work here. Susan
   ~Posted by Realist101, Jan 5, 2013

Richard
Nov 5, 2013
15 words of truth. You have to get to my age to realize it, though!
Thanks for this.
   ~Posted by Richard, Nov 5, 2013

Topazshell
Dec 18, 2013
I like it. It's short and humorous.
   ~Posted by Topazshell, Dec 18, 2013



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