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Who loves earth most: there are much parrallel's between love and mist
Posted by du courage, Jan 23, 2015. 637 views. ID = 6887

Who loves earth most

Posted by du courage, Jan 23, 2015. 637 views. ID = 6887
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This morning I had to go to the lab for blood analysis. It was misty and the world looked soft. Thinking about it, I realized how much mist and love have in common.
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Mist shows the world
through a lover's eye
sharp edges softened
the ordinary made mysterious
imperfections and ugly patches
lovingly veiled
No one can ever love
the world as much
as the all forgiving mist

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alilee
Jan 23, 2015
Beautifully expressed!
   ~Posted by alilee, Jan 23, 2015



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