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The Test of Time: A long relationship takes more than passion
Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Aug 5, 2012. 3453 views. ID = 5785

The Test of Time

Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Aug 5, 2012. 3453 views. ID = 5785
This post was written in 9 minutes.
You have to enjoy being together if you want it to last
This post has been awarded 75 stars by 17 readers.

At first there was passion, hot as a flame
Alas more is needed for your love to remain
For flames will cool down as embers still glow
But if your mate is your friend your love will still grow
It takes laughter and fun to make a life that's worthwhile
For real love to last it needs a kiss and a smile
I can attest to all this for I speak from my heart
Our love is as strong as it was from the start


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This post has been awarded 75 stars by 17 readers.
This post is part of a writing prompt: The Tie that Binds

Comments


Laura
Aug 5, 2012
Well said!
   ~Posted by Laura, Aug 5, 2012

Douglas
Aug 5, 2012
I shared this on my personal FB page this morning...got some very positive reactions. I'm also adding it to the featured gallery. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Aug 5, 2012

R. Wesley Lovil
Aug 5, 2012
Thanks Douglas, I guess it is right that it's better if it comes from the heart.
   ~Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Aug 5, 2012

Jeff Howe
Aug 6, 2012
Smooth writing. Nice work.
   ~Posted by Jeff Howe, Aug 6, 2012

SavannahHowe
Aug 16, 2012
I'm too young to know such love as this, but I can still see it. This poem was heartwarming :)
   ~Posted by SavannahHowe, Aug 16, 2012

Audrey_E_Marquis
Oct 12, 2012
Love, love, LOVE this!
   ~Posted by Audrey_E_Marquis, Oct 12, 2012

Megan
Nov 24, 2012
I think that is truly beautiful :) Thank you so much for taking the time to share it with us. It's a perfect view of how I want my marriage to be. Beautiful.
   ~Posted by Megan, Nov 24, 2012

Oscar Wizard
Aug 31, 2013
Splendid!
   ~Posted by Oscar Wizard, Aug 31, 2013



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