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Apr 2, 2011
|What a nice story you wrote for the writing prompt this week! I'd like to put it in the featured gallery, so others will notice it...but I wondered if you would mind doing a little bit of editing first...|
Online stories are a lot easier to read if you put an extra line break between paragraphs; it keeps the paragraphs from all running together.
If you do that, drop me a reply note when you're done, and I'll post this in the gallery. :)