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W. Lady

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It's him (May 30, 2008)

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Katie
Jun 12, 2008
Hello! :-)
I was also going to ask you if you lived in France, but I see Doug beat me to it. :-) If you don't mind me asking, is French your primary language?

Douglas
Jun 7, 2008
Well, your writing is quite good for someone whose second language is English. I do notice, once in awhile, odd quirks like adjectives used in place of adverbs, or things along those lines. I can point those out if I spot them, if that's something you're interested in correcting, but I won't bother if you're not really interested in going back and fixing those kinds of things. :)

Here's an example: "Even walking along the beach was already very enjoying"

Probably should be "Even walking along the beach was already very enjoyable"

Douglas
Jun 6, 2008
Hi! I see you were able to make it back into the site. From the things you've written, I assume you live in France? Is English your second language? Just curious...

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