vessels: Fifteen Minutes of Fiction
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Oct 1, 2008
|Hi vessels! I'm not sure if I've ever given you a proper welcome to the site, so let me say: WELCOME! :)|
I just read your cat piece, and I wanted to give you a small suggestion which will make your writing more appealing for others to read: if you put in some paragraph breaks (a double-line space) where appropriate, it'll make people more interested in reading what you've written.
Internet attention span is, just by the nature of the beast, a short-attention-span media, and when people see one huge paragraph, it tends to make them shy away.