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Alien Perspective (Mar 21, 2014)
Pi Day (Mar 16, 2013)
Alphabet Soup - I (Jul 26, 2011)
Free Write (Jul 26, 2011)
Alphabet Soup - C (Jun 10, 2008)
spring (Apr 30, 2008)
oath to the dog (Apr 26, 2008)
why (Apr 23, 2008)

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Hi my name is Erika. I been writing fiction for a long time. Writing makes me fell free.

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Free Write (Jul 24, 2011)

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Douglas
Mar 28, 2013
Yes, you're correct about the last line being messed up - you've got three extra syllables. But all the other lines are right on!

Douglas
Jul 27, 2011
Hi Erika, your piece is just fine. Nothing wrong with that. Thanks for checking. :)

Douglas
Apr 24, 2008
Yes, you did that right, except in some places you put 3 spaces instead of 2 between your paragraphs. But it's definitely easier to read than when there weren't any spaces at all.

Douglas
Apr 23, 2008
Hi snapper, glad to see you got logged back in! Just a real quick suggestion for you (which we tell all the new writers on the site): when you're writing, if you put a double-space between each of your paragraphs, it makes it easier to read.

I look forward to seeing what else you'll write!

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