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BatteryAcid's Writer Profile Page. ID = 346

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Snake For A Day (Sep 28, 2008)
Java Man (Sep 19, 2008)
Final Destination (Sep 19, 2008)

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Half-lit
Nov 3, 2008
Ahh, you caught that, nice. I was going for that exact feeling of the awkward pause, we seem to get when we have asked someone out and we are unsure of the outcome.

Thank you, I appreciate any critique

Half-lit
Nov 3, 2008
Thank you for commenting. Well, this poem is a slurry of feelings and emotions, of what I have been going through lately. I work in the auto industry, and the slow economic times have brought on a heavy weight of stress. Although the stress is there the feelings are fleeting and I move on.
The devil could be several things: like the dealership or the government, bills- with me being the monkey I guess I am not making the change I should be, hence me riding the back of the devil (which I feel now as I write this is all things stressing me). Thank you for inquiring.

Cheers

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