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Our Trip to Hawaii: I know we forgot something at home
Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Oct 24, 2010. 1333 views. ID = 4015

Our Trip to Hawaii

Posted by R. Wesley Lovil, Oct 24, 2010. 1333 views. ID = 4015
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I always get these nagging thoughts when we leave

The bags packed and we're ready to go
The house will be fine I say, I just know
It's so easy to fly to isles with a sea so blue
It's just this worry of something we didn't do
The iron is off and I checked the coffee pot
Just being gone so long makes me fret a lot
Relax let's have some fun the house will be OK
We're here now so just go to the sea and play
We return to find just what we had forgotten
Open windows and drapes that are quite sodden

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